[ale] Microsoft haiku...(OT)

Danny Cox danscox at mindspring.com
Thu Jul 24 17:09:53 EDT 2003


Brian,

	A small correction:

On Wed, 2003-07-23 at 18:11, Brian J. Dowd wrote:
> ------------------------------------------
> The Window closes.
> Nothing will open it now.
> Everything lost.

	The third line has only 4 sylables.  How about "Everything is lost." or
"Everything was lost."?

-- 
kernel, n.: A part of an operating system that preserves the
medieval traditions of sorcery and black art.

Danny

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